- Non-Erotic Poetry
- he read my body
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Click herehe read my body
of work
each and every live
& all up in between
but even as i issued
my expressions of passion
somehow he missed
the most important part
where i had written
into existence
the truth of my love
upon my very flesh
& pressed in into his
or perhaps ...
he caught it all
& only pretended
not to comprehend
so that he may avoid
the introspection
of admittance
to himself
(&) into my realm
cause comfort doesn't exist
where i dwell
& change is scary
so i turn the page
in my composition
& tell myself
i will no longer
let him read
my works
hut he's already
read between the lines
- COMMENTS
GuiltyPleasureover 16 years ago...I enjoyed this very much, at least as much as you previous submission today, but I find the ampersands distracting rather than enhancing. If I could know the reason for using them - because there must be a reason - I'd love to know. I know it is "nit picking" but why use the lower case I?
Tess
RhymeFairyover 16 years agoI read every line and felt, passion displaced because he, couldn't, wouldn't ... count the ways, of times misplaced, plunge of loves true calling ~~ Your flow is spot on. Need a lil editing but otherwisw a very, very nice write of passion, not caught ~~ More Please !!
