Head and Shoulders Knees and Toes

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susansnow
susansnow
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I feel as if this energy should be directed into the lap of a man. I feel like I want to walk outside amidst the fireworks and smoke and reveal myself. I want to lick my lips and conjure trails of men almost but not quite like them so I'd never fall again I'd just use the replacements settle for things. I want the fire without the burn the freeze without stuck tongue palsey and frostbite. My fingers felt like jello gliding across your back. Each stroke a song and when I bit down I knew you would never be able to forget. I never meant for it to happen this way but it is a dog eat dog world and I strike quickly and completely taking with me only soul. My load is light and must remain that way. Drink my loves! Drink!

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susansnowsusansnowalmost 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

Thanks for all the feedback.

TrixareforkidsTrixareforkidsalmost 10 years ago
I'll have a shot of this!

I enjoy you lack of punctuation, it forces multiple readings and you give so much to your writing that even when it's incomprehensible it's enjoyable to read again and again.

tazz317tazz317almost 10 years ago
DRINK DRINK DRINK

let all lusty young lovers just drink, Not Sip. tk u mlj lv nv

todski28todski28almost 10 years ago
ha

without stuck tongue is a really good word pairing, the three T's make the words trip over each other just enough to give a sense of it.

as to the biting...........