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Click hereErotic subjugation
Trumps feigned indignation
I know the implication
Of my wicked inclination
(I gave you every indication)
On your bed I'm burning
In these chains I'm turning
In my mind I'm learning
Just how to spark your yearning
My heart and soul you reign
Such pleasure out of pain!
Your need for me is plain
Your heart the prize I've gained
I'm not just referring to this piece, but your writing in general and overall; you're a talented writer. What I particularly enjoy is the way in which you draw the reader in until it seems as if we are almost sitting on your lap, well I can but hope.
I am starting to write for Lit and hopefully I can persuade you to read my stuff as it gets on the site. More importantly though is how can I persuade you to reply, so that we can keep in touch? Any suggestions please send to london_james2010@yahoo.co.uk
Thanks a lot and best of luck
James
PS I didn't know I like poetry until read you!