heaven california

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      winterish november rains then clearance
      californian automnish december
      grapefruits and oranges on trees
      last visit will you miss will you remember
      winter or spring strong drink
      to accept and melt and forget
      the difference


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2004-12-13

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annaswirlsannaswirlsover 19 years ago
haze

this took me to a train window into what might be day break or twilight no one can tell through the fog and motion, what season is coming who is going-- I love when poetry takes me like this, fade to black thank you sj

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
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enter through these open doors

into these oft closed minds,

it is okay

your potato soup is waiting-

I hope you have been well

flyguy69flyguy69over 19 years ago
A feathered edge

I love the "ishy" seasons, here. Nicely blurs the edges of language, too.

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