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Click hereLife is gone
Death is here
And i Face Him Without fear
The music plays my very last note
No one there to more or gloat
There at my funeral my soul dies off
Forgotten yet in the sands of time
20 years later no one remembers me death
That i died for freedom or that my soul went to rest
Loves lost,Hearts found
As the world comes crashing down
There is no savior hes already dead
Its time for the world to lose it's head
You definitely need to proofread your work. This poem is riddled with errors,
which should have been caught.
No one there to more or gloat - "more" = "mourn"?
20 years later no one remembers me death - "me" = "my"
Loves lost,Hearts found - "lost,hearts" - space needed
There is no savior hes already dead - "hes" = "he's"
Its time for the world to lose it's head - "Its" = "It's"