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Helping Hand

byerectus123©

there is such emotion
when you apply the lotion
and jerk me off
I begin to cough
that passes too
like a cloud that blocks the sun
then you say, "Ok you're done"
I dress, I sigh, put on my shoes
what else remains for me to do
I take the warm towel
and remove any foul
sign of intimacy
so none may see
that I am now rejuvinated
ready to confront and suplicate
to deal with all the drama
as if I were the Dali Lama
and no one suspects
I'd be a wreck
if there was less emotion
when you apply the lotion

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by erectus12306/01/18

as to line 5

Thanks for your comment--I could have just added the two lines together but I thought that "to" and "too" rang the rhyme and the off note of the flated ending sets up the surprise of line 6 which onemore...

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by UnderYourSpell05/30/18

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I like how you bring this full circle, very clever. It's a bit unsettling that line 5 has no rhyme which interrupts what is otherwise a smooth read. Thank you for sharing.

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