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Find me an ocean
kiss her hard
among waves of salt and sand
where the sky meets blue
and two bodies
hover
fingers tangled
- COMMENTS
UnderYourSpellabout 16 years agoDon't pay any mind to the anonymous comment it's obviously someone who has to write reams to get their point across whereas you can weave magic in just a few lines
Sapphos Sisterabout 16 years agoI might have more sympathy for the last comment if it was not anonymous. There is a world of difference between an image poetically realised and a 'story'. I love this poem and wish that I had written it.
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Anonymousabout 16 years agoThis proves my long-standing opinion that "poets" are actually failed writers who can't focus well enough to produce a real story. What a pity.
KOLKOREabout 16 years agoThis poem comes across as the theme it builds on: clean and clear and effective. I can almost catch the image and it seems beautiful...
