Her fingers on my nipples

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thinkspw
thinkspw
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Her fingers on my nipples
Punctuated my safe word
As it passed her red lips
Hot, husky, and demanding –
“Subjugated”.
Which I was, suspended
Between a doorframe exposed
To her whims and my fears.
Her experienced hands played
Every naked inch of me, a tool,
Shamelessly enticing pleasure
Turning pain and humiliation
Into a need, dependent on her.

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AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Interesting...

but was it misleading? You were under her complete control.. which is "Subjugated". But was that also your 'safe word' and if it was, why was she saying it? They may seem like minor points, but it did make me stop and think and I lost the flow. Otherwise it was okay.