- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Her Subcommander
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Click hereshe got a boner
from her owner
got a collar on her neck
got a subcommander
who takes her to the depths
some have tried to save her
I watched her ship go down
not my place to intervene
exhibition her pleasure
humiliation her game
all set a course
compasses point and spin
some prance on high moral ground
I gave that up to...
watch her dive on down
to depths of brillant blue
below the swells of past neglect
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 17 years agoNow here she sounds like a truly fun gal
The kind you'd love to take home to mother and...
Never mind.
Magnolia13almost 20 years agoWonderful images and what a command of the language (of submission) you have. A very enjoyable read.
Syndra Lynnalmost 20 years agoThis is a wonderful picture. I like the ship metaphor and the feelings it surfaces. Thanks!
