tagNon-Erotic PoetryHer Subcommander

Her Subcommander


she got a boner
from her owner
got a collar on her neck
got a subcommander
who takes her to the depths

some have tried to save her
I watched her ship go down
not my place to intervene
exhibition her pleasure
humiliation her game

all set a course
compasses point and spin
some prance on high moral ground
I gave that up to...
watch her dive on down
to depths of brillant blue
below the swells of past neglect

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