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Click hereHer Walk
I watch her walk
from a vantage point behind:
trim ankles and calves well-shaped
connect to nylon-covered thighs
and the flesh of her moves
with a sensuality
focusing attention.
Outlines elastic show through
her skirt drawn tight over curving hips
drawing mind’s eye between her legs,
intrigued with all the action there.
Flesh writhing in swirling motion,
shielding her very womanhood
riding out the storm in dark, moist warmth.
Oh, to stay and linger there!
But she strides with purpose,
moving quickly beyond seeing,
leaving quickened desires unsatisfied.
and you speak the language fluently. Your eyes too, traveled seductively through the verses and brought to this reader all what you saw - and felt. I hope we get to see more from your eyes and pen again soon. Welcome to the neighborhood!
Vixxx
I look forward to more of your work. This is a nice little slice of life you share in your first poem here. Thank you.
Tess
this! Sensually stimulating and lushly admiring. Love it. Thank you, LJ.