Nails feather her nape
as warmth unwinds.
Sweat roams a path;
droplets open uncrossed legs,
exposing moist down
in the cool theater.
Lover's hand drifts,
drawn toward the damp.
Lips part.
A single morsel pleases.
Tongue twirls,
mixing sweet and salt.
Circles spread,
widening ripples of response.
Nipples rise
as longing swirls
and quintessence trembles
soft echoes through the shadows.
A puff escapes her lips.
Popcorn rockets in the dark.
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Tristesse2 made suggestions on structure and word choice, improving this piece.
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