His Hammer Strong

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Isolated and cold
the citizenry of the heart
laughter, love and hope
have been abandoned

with one strong swing
He wields the hammer
to break her and know her
and delve into her abyss

in the tree of her heart
the branches go limp
as He calls on her fears
to release them again

a symphony of tears
and sobs fill the air
her heart leaps in shock
under the pain of growth

His brazen words break
down a mountain of fear
'tis the formula He knows
to revive her cadaverous soul

she has been broken
through tears she is whole
He reaches within, burning
His autograph on her soul

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Well written

Even a Master can relate... well done lil one, hopes that a girl will adding more

velvet passionvelvet passionalmost 19 years ago
excellent

i love it. you thought your way thru and brought out the inner feelings ...excellently done!

kaytekaytealmost 19 years ago
You hit it

You are very talented.

You nailed it! That describes so clearly what my Sir does to me.

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
Welcome to Literotica

Great first submission,

this is a really lovely

piece and a delight to read.

Thanks.

~ Jenn

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