His Look

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He just keeps looking at me1
and I look at him
and turn away.
I look back
and surprised, I find
he just keeps
looking at me
2
I furrow a brow
"Okay... what now?"
Why does he look like that?
Like he just smelled a rose?
He
just keeps looking
at me
3
absorbing
soundless
"What!"
Did he just win something?
What is going on
in that head of his?
Dammit!
Defiant, I glare.
He
just
keeps
looking
at
me
4
stranded on an arid thought.5


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average ginaaverage ginaover 19 years agoAuthor
For those of you who read this...

This poem is flawed. Please read the correct poem, "Looking". It has the correct links as well as the correct poem. The last line does not really fit right with this poem. Thanks.