- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Hit Me With Your Best Shot
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Click hereDid “they” just try to clip me?
Puleeze.
Is that all they had?
A mere, alleged, something to bring me to one knee
For no longer than it takes to draw my next breath
And unsheathe my sword of Dedication?
I am well trained.
Call me by my appropriate name in battles such as this.
I am Soldier Gurly.
Just, plain Loyal to the grave.
Tell them to “go ahead and make my day.”
How long has it been since I said,
“I will take a bullet for you?”
Long enough for you to know that I will.
Brigid, rising, for Sting
2-4-08
- COMMENTS
notnamerabout 16 years agoPoem uses good "antipathy" ensconced within succinct words
----- Example: ... clip ... Puleeze ...
----- WHICH CAN BE BROKEN DOWN TO: "lip pull" "pull easy" "pull please"
----- strikes a tone and maintains it well
LeBrozabout 16 years agoOh my — a sub with attitude, responding with an attitude of, "Is that all you've got? Is that the best you can do?!" Fascinating new name given you BTW. Take time & Google "Brigid" and its roots in Celtic mythology.
