hitching a ride

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opposable thumbs
cracking peanuts
popping aluminum tops

seducing the driver,
hitching a ride


soft brush cheek
turns face like a rooting reflex
trace lips open
tease tongue
suction holding
begging a moment

sink in deep
fingers prepare holes in fertile soil
for planting seeds of thick thumb replacements

hitching the ride

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twelveoonetwelveooneover 19 years ago
how was the ride?

these two lines - well - well, what flyguy said

"fingers prepare holes in fertile soil

for planting seeds of thick thumb replacements"

flyguy69flyguy69over 19 years ago
Screeeech!

I'm hitting the brakes and backing up! Hop in, Seattle; I'll take you anywhere you wanna go!

Very subtle, seductive poetry.

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
1st 2 stanzas

really jumped out at me. Love the poem and mentioned it on the new poems thread.

tungtied2utungtied2uover 19 years ago
I like how

you move from sound to touch in this. Nice textures.

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