Hobbies

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I make knick-knacks from driftwood
windchimes, ashtrays, and such
then I give them away
I don't care for them much

I hit in the batting cage
until my hands have turned red
sometimes the machine
chucks a ball at my head

with Mother of Pearl
I coat grains of sand
with luster they glisten
then slip from my hand

I build ships in bottles
meticulous, utmost of care
when I finish I toss them
over my shoulder, somewhere

I throw kisses to women
whom I pass on the road
visions of wild oats
that I never sewed

I make paper airplanes
for sisters and brothers
some of them tend to fly
farther than others

in the dead of the night
I carve guns out of soap
my escape plans unfinished
crippled by hope

I write little messages
that I wrap around bricks
and heave them through windows
someone else has to fix


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YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
Hobbies

A cute and pleasant read

Each hobby different and

tied up in one stanza

with a tag rhyme twist.

The rhythm works well

and the last stanza describes

the poet's role in society

(and that of the critic).

Please write more poems like this.

TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
Living

on your own terms.

above attatchment...perhaps

I love the bricks and windows

hehe

Thank you

MerrymakerMerrymakeralmost 20 years ago
So much about this...

that I like, I'd have to repost the whole thing in quotes. Great images distilled down to sparkle...well done!

~Merry

dreamsweetdreamsweetalmost 20 years ago
almost desperate

I get this feeling that there is something desperate going on behind these words, but I just don't know what. But I like that mystery, a little bit... :)

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 20 years ago
I enjoyed the

meter and rhyme here. A comment on our disposable society? Or too much disposable time?

I write a few words

that few ever read

and if I'm lucky

a few go to seed

Nice words, Word!

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