- Erotic Poetry
- Holding My Breath
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Click hereI was looking at you
Standing there, in front of me
In all your glory
Like a sunshine
Meant to enlighten my world
Like a blizzard
Meant to shake up my desires
My love.
I was looking at you
Holding my breath.
Your body, like some poetry
Recites itself over and over
In my mind, in my soul
The soft skin
The velvet touch
Feels like silk, under my fingers
Sending shivers through me
Reigniting the fires.
I was touching you
Holding my breath.
That kiss we shared
Could challenge any writer
To write its true worth
To reiterate its divinity
The way our passions collide
The dance our tongues do
To heighten the pleasure
To find a connection through our souls.
I was kissing you
Holding my breath.
The Feeling of being yours
Giving you all of myself
To your love, your heart
Immersing myself
In the joy of being inside you
In the heat of your desires
Taking pleasures, from your pleasure
Making your love mine.
I was making love to you
Holding my breath.
- COMMENTS
greenmountaineeralmost 8 years agoNice, xblaze. The narrative build towards climax. Needs a little paring back IMO. A good exercise is to keep removing a word at a time until the meaning changes and/or the line doesn't sound right.
