Holding Tight

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lilmuse
lilmuse
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Please don't hurt
try to be strong
I'll be your crutch
I'll help you along

Don't go back
just forge ahead
Don't let them see
whats in your head

This will go away
the pain
day by day

Hold your head high
know you aren't alone
for I am your shadow

I'll be strong for you
If you promise to be strong too.

lilmuse
lilmuse
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KOLKOREKOLKOREover 17 years ago
Maybe too tight

Could not get far either with the image of the supportive shadow. Otherwise, two peaces of advice for hurting people which I would not provide would be: “Don't let them see

whats in your head”, and the idea that “I'll be your crutch”.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Starts off really good

then kinda trails off