- Erotic Poetry
- horses, lip gloss and elvis
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Click herenever understood
why the girls all liked horses
unicorns and elvis
so obvious now
truth,
spent my adolescence
on water jets and cold creme
mirrors and brush handles
ice cubes and barette clips
list goes on
only now understanding
the potential of clean oiled
harness, leather that fits in
so many places
cold metal bit kissed between lips
try not to smile for me baby
reins tied
pulling you in
riding wooden chair
backwards
saddle horn moist
spur spark
all so obvious now
riding my fist
like a stallion
calling for you.
- COMMENTS
Sappholoversalmost 20 years agoHemingway wrote that a good writer gave you only the tip of the iceberg and left the rest for the reader to fathom. Your words give us the tip of the volcano. The poem is beautifully suggestive: sparse in its language, but highly provocative.... A favorite line--"do not smile for me baby." The horse has such powerful erotic associations, and you give us, through your allusions to riding and stallions, etc., a charged way of talking about wild, untamed passion... I can see the woman in the poem riding the man into the sunset of a new morning.
jthserraabout 20 years agoto a well oiled pony. So very erotic. Excellent poem, it brings back some memories...
jim : )
sandspikeabout 20 years agoabout the ladies. Thanks for this info presented so well.
