How come when you said the vows
you said them lovingly with a smile?
How come when you broke them
you did it angrily with a scowl?
How come this difference
from there to here?
How come you've changed
and I live in fear?
How come I used to be
your rock?
How come you now despise
my cock?
How come you no longer
want me?
How come you insist on
being free?
How come I'm so wrong,
what did I do?
How come you changed
from being you?
How come those old vows
now mean nothing?
How come you've decided
to stop loving?
How come, how come, we've
reached this outcome?
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PERHAPS YOU QUESTION THE WRONG PERSON
check the mirror 1st then rephrase...TK U MLJ LV NV
I liked
The "outcome" at the end. I hope the story isn't true though.
@ painedlove
Pensive? Mmmm (thinking) . . . could have been the title!
pensive...
.........and a lot more.......
@ Hypoxia
Many thanks for reading and leaving comments. Much appreciated and I'm heartened that you managed to get to the very last word. The outcome: I'll chew over your suggestion
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