- Non-Erotic Poetry
- How do we move on
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Telling you all I feel
My biggest fear is rejection
Letting you in, to know my heart
And you feeling nothing in return.
I can never repair
The damage I've caused
Your heart I've broken
Your pain runs deep.
I can feel your heart ache
I hear the hesitation in your voice
You long to be with me
Yet you're scared of the pain.
How do we move on?
Get beyond our past?
Learn to trust and love again
To give ourselves to one another.
- COMMENTS
darkerdreameralmost 17 years agoin less conventional lines like "Letting you in, to know my heart", other lines bring up more questions than the ones you pose, in the last stanza especially. The poem feels like it is missing an ending, maybe the end hasn't happened yet but it will need one eventually. Also, don’t use MS Word, it capitalizes every line ;) Keep writing
