How Goes the Old

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wife, Smitty? Life
colder than a

witch's tit or
does it smolder?

Why then is it
Irene's twin bed

has five dog-eared
King James bibles?

Heading for your
king-sized bathroom

for a pseudo-
wifey visit?

Webcam's tracking;
Smitty's whacking

by the toilet,
soon to soil it.

Shit! She's only
blown the circuit!

Now it's wipe clean
just a blank screen.

Good night, Irene.
Irene, Good night.


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MaggieMae9MaggieMae9over 11 years ago
I totally get it

Love that w/ poems....only the author knows the nitty gritty....but this one, i feel completely and dig. the irony is palpable and the choppiness (sp?) of it flows beautifully! I get the "good night Irene" part and smile.....well done!

TzaraTzaraalmost 12 years ago
I like the extremely short lines

and the sardonic tone. I'm not sure I quite follow the last bit, but as always, you tell quite a detailed little story with very few words.

Interesting.

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
LOOKS AS IF I'LL SEE YOU IN OUR DREAMS

and the mountain sometimes cums to the Mo, TK U MLJ LV NV

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