How much

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How much hurting
Can one heart stand?
When hurt cuts off the beat
The flow
It cuts you in half
Feels like a band
Wondering when will
It release the hold

Tight
Tighter still
Choking
Hard to breathe

Tired
Tired of feeling
So tired of caring
Of wanting
Release
Sweet release

Wanting
Wanting it to stop
To cease
Give you some relief

Tears
Tears of pain
Tears of joy
Tears of loss

Time
What is time
A second
A minute
An hour
It all goes
By the same
And it all
Doesn't matter

For all
Our time
Is borrowed
That's what
They say

How much more
Can one soul
Take?
How much more?

It's time to rest
You did your best
Although you didn't
Pass the test

Now you know
Just how much
Is enough

Your time
Is done.

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4 Comments
Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnover 19 years ago
I enjoyed

the repetition and sporadic rhymes. Emotion plays well here. Nice.

lovelylisalovelylisaover 19 years ago
yes,

I know that feeling too *hugs*

Kajira CallistaKajira Callistaover 19 years ago
Each one

outdoes the last. :)

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22over 19 years ago
your poem

has been mentioned in Tuesday's reviews.

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