- Erotic Poetry
- Hugh
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Hugh dangle your wiggly worm
In a golddiggers mouth
Feed me like a bird
Let me suck you dry
...whilst I'm twenty five.
Others may not marry you for love nor money
But I will
You can be on top
If you don't get dizzy
But still you are eighty five
And look I'm still young
That's a bitter Phil to swallow.
You've never been a wallflower my luv
But today you will just have to hang loose...
You naughty little octogenarian
Mother Nature... has cooked your goose...
- COMMENTS
buttersalmost 13 years agoat least she changed her mind about marrying him. could it be the prenupts weren't satisfying enough? still, this write aims at playful/tease but is just a little one-dimensional for me. those opening lines, however, were solid. sordid, but solid.
UnderYourSpellalmost 13 years agoVery amusing but I got confused when he changed from Hugh to Phil oh and by the way just because they are 80 doesn't mean they can't :)
Desejoalmost 13 years agoAnyway...in all seriousness I don't thing the last line in the first stanza is needed, and given the tone of the rest of the poem Whilst seems a bit formal and stilted. Same in the next line with the use of "nor".
But still. It made me smile.
