- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Hugzz
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Click hereThe poet said this is wonderful
The imagination smiled brightly at the vivid image of her hug
The brain said you deserve it, mate
The Heart was beating for this moment only
The brown eyes filled with water when they dared reach their masterful counterpart
The infectious laughter that rung in those ears
Finally the moment of truth
She smelled like freshly picked jasmine
When given the favour
All that mumbling mouth uttered was "your welcome"
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoi meant you're welcome cause as the title says she gave me a hug lol the girl of my dreams and instead of coming up with something normal all i could say is thank you but the question is what for? is it really the hug?. Thank your for your comment though this is my first piece of work.
Thanks a lot KOLKORE, yea this is pretty rough work haha. Like the goes like this... jazz asked me to fix her ipod and if you like someone then you do anything for them don't you? What she said is if you do i would give the best hug you got.
When i was trying to sleep these lines just sort of floated around my head and i decided to write something thus i started of with saying the poet said this is wonderful. Any improvements i can make please let me know. One day i may give it to her lol.
Thanks again
normal jeanalmost 16 years agowas the jasmine indeed the welcome, or did you mean-- "you're welcome"?
KOLKOREalmost 16 years agoSomething is innocently captivating and heart warming here. I feel some difficulty in the flow of the poem ( I can’t define it, at least not yet), call it a diamond in the rough. And I believe a welcome to this poem section is due…
