- Erotic Poetry
- Hurry Back~
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Click herehot an wet
sticky sweet
waitin till we next meet
tits bursting
tight an tingling
firm an hot
tummy churning
buttery cream
shooting thru
body shivers
thighs so hard
shaking an quivering
need fulfilling
hot wet core
tight an contracting
shivering with need
naughty mind
wicked thoughts
craving the touch
body a'shiver
needing you
taking me to the edge
waiting till we next meet
trembling
sizzling
afire for you
hurry back hun~
- COMMENTS
Minnie(virgin)over 19 years agoLildarling, Blushing(RED) This only happens in my dreams. Glad you could convert my dreams to words.
Jennifer Cover 19 years agoGreat poem as always Lil!
I too would like to say how digusting I find it that someone has the disrespect to be so blatanly nasty as to leave such a vicous comment! This is a persons hardwork and talent you find so easily to slam! If you don't like it fair enough but to be so rude is not acceptable behaviour on Literotica and to not even have the courage to leave your name means that you are not only narrow minded but a COWARD!
My Erotic Tailover 19 years agofunny evereyone else liked it...
must be a jealousy thing,
no balls huh anon?
if you were a good poet you could tell what makes it week and what could make it better...but mindless verbal lashings only show your limitations...<grin>
try more constructive criticism and a nicer way
of saying what you mean, or is it your nature?
ART~ (MY NAME PROUDLY WITH HONOR)
