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perks
perks
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a dusty stetson coverd raven tresses
while shadowing her eyes against the sun
and strapped around her thigh a silver gun
it’s bullets born from Goethe’s Love’s Distresses

she stroked her weapon lovingly and slow
remembering how it had brought her here
experience dissolved from her all fear
while Auden’s blues brought power to her flow

her leathered feathers put on quite the show
distracting him the closer she drew near
he shivered as he watched the cowgirl draw

she challenged everything he ought to know
and shot at him with structure so severe
alliteration, addled him to awe

syllables confused him with their stresses
until his voice drew silent and undone
knowing he was beat before he’d won
he wondered at the sting of her successes

The moral of this story is the law
this cowgirl writes the poems, and you withdraw

perks
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4 Comments
BooMerengueBooMerenguealmost 20 years ago
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I don't know why you doubt your effort- I think this is great! Thanks, Perky!

twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 20 years ago
What can I say?

outgunned,

Loved it! Ma'm!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
I read this...

....three or four times trying to get the meter to fit the form but just can't. It doesn't really matter unless one is a stickler for correctness (surprisingly this tree-hugger isn't) because it is a great read.

Maria2394Maria2394almost 20 years ago
yee haw!!!

I love this line-

alliteration, addled him to awe

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