- Erotic Poetry
- Hyperemia
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Click hereI see your soul beyond those deep blue eyes...
It whispers threats of love, and yet disdain.
Your body strong; pulls hard against my chain.
Fall prey to me! Seduce me with your cries.
You will not run from me, you pompous slave,
Your soul calls out to feel my harshest lash.
My claw upon your back leaves bloody gash.
It is my sting you will forever crave.
Despite your pleas the pain will make you brave.
I hear you scream and watch your body thrash.
I stand above and bathe you with my piss.
No joy for you, no ride upon love’s wave.
My body quivers even as you gnash;
Deny me not or you will hear my hiss!
The blood that flows within you makes you rise;
I see it course along your throbbing vein.
Your cock is hard! Enjoy my wicked pain
For soon I’ll cum on you and claim my prize.
Now give to me your love, and just one kiss,
Your lips, my slave, will bring eternal bliss.
- COMMENTS
Miss Oatlashalmost 20 years agoAuthorMy 'subject matter' (The Mutt) thanks you all for your comments...
lostandfounderalmost 20 years agoYou scare me...but still a great poem.
Even flow across the lines like butterflies....
Bloody butterflies to be sure....
Anonymousalmost 20 years agoGreat flow and rhymeng skillz. As perks said, this form lends itself well to your subject matter. Good one, Miss 0.
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perksalmost 20 years agoBT!!!
WOW, ms. O, loved the imagery in this. I just love erotic poetry. The structure lends itself perfectly to this subject matter, I'm not sure the context would have been as strong without it. It's a bound thing, I think.
"My claw upon your back leaves bloody gash" if you had removed "leaves" and put ",a" I think that line works better, and gash doesn't feel forced to rhyme and still agrees grammatically.
and I didn't buy this line "Deny me not or you will hear my hiss" felt like your rhyme was so forced, but it still works with the poem. It just stuck out for me.
Thanks for participating, I enjoyed your perspective.
