- Non-Erotic Poetry
- HyperSleep
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This body has for so long been a tomb
so dark and cold; no place for life to spring
awake, and yet your hands begin to sing
and chase away the comfort of the gloom.
The light pours in and basking in its glow
this corpse does rise enrapt in your romance;
allows your song to lead me through the dance
to wash away the shroud that holds me low.
Then as we dance the Stars put on a show
The Sun and Moon competing for our glance
for in this Universe we reign supreme!
Yet now this heart, alive again, does grow
and quickly do I spin into your trance!
So happily I miss your dark eyed gleam
While demon like you reached into my womb
with lips so cold my soul becomes a thing
to shatter as my ears begin to ring
and now your song changes to one of doom.
Enshrouded once again in death I seem
to once again be plagued by foolish dream.
- COMMENTS
ferociouskittycatover 19 years agoGod, you made that technique seem so simple.
Fantastic job!! >^..^<
lostandfounderover 19 years agoFrom dark to hope and back to dark again
all within the few short lines. I actually had hope for a happy ending. It was lost to the cold dark shores of despair. Not a perfect sonnet, but far, far, far from an average one.
Maria2394over 19 years agoBoo, now you need to watch over me while I sleep? haunting, very well done, too good in fact :)
Anonymousover 19 years agoHypernightmare! Well done Boo! Yet another very dfferent approach to the challenge.
perksover 19 years agoBT!!!
your meter is a tiny bit off in some places, but it's few and far between. BTW, if I ever get to pick, I will not be choosing your sleep...EVER! eep!
