I am lossing you

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I am losing you..
I am losing me..
There's no wisdom,
There's no freedom,
There's no love,
There's no courage..

There is only paranoia..

Twisted desires,
Twisted memories,
Twisted lust..

Twisted again and again..

It pulls you in..

Thorns around your neck,
Like a haunted necklace..

You can do no wrong,
You can do no wrong about this,
You can do no wrong about this place..

You are exactly inside my mind..
Inside my twisted mind.

All roads are closed,
All paths are leading to you..

You are like the star..
Your body is glowing,
But underneath is dust and cold..

You are like the moon..
Your face so beautiful,
And your soul so corruptive..

You are like the sun..
Your heart so shiny,
But burns anything..

Loneliness is my only friend,
but even with her with are too many..

Is this death?
Is this the death of my mind?
Is this the death of my twisted mind?

Do your remember when you left me
where I find you?
In the love hotel..With her..

My only thought was to take revenge..

From you..
And from her..
My hands are full of blood..
I lick them both..
The taste is salty but powerful..

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
losing, not lossing like tossing

Too many elipses, and elipses are always three dots...

The poem is all tell and no show.