I Can Hardly Wait.

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Written by jes_da_man:
Thursday, August 9, 2001 - 2:42:00 PM.

Please be nice enough to vote or comment on this (or any other, or all) of my stories or poems. It would be truly appreciated.

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I can hardly wait for the day,
When we're once again together,
To fill our two hearts with joy,
And feel as light as a feather.

I can hardly wait for the day,
When I wrap my arms around you,
And whisper softly in your ear,
Expressing all my love for you.

I can hardly wait for the day,
When your soft lips, I can kiss,
Tasting their sweetness,
While again, feeling a heavenly bliss.

I can hardly wait for the day,
When your body is next to mine,
And I show you that I am yours,
And will be yours for all time.

I can hardly wait for the day,
And this is nothing but the truth.
When to myself, I can finally say,
I'm with my sweet BabyRuth.

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jes_da_manjes_da_manabout 13 years agoAuthor
Smiling...

Thank you for your comments MyZenTrail and Koba. They are truly appreciated.

Hahaha... no Koba, this was not a poem written for a candy bar (Even though she was sweet enough to be one.) Her name was Ruth... she called me Pappa... I called her baby... so yes, as a term of endearment, I called her my BabyRuth...

And yes, I must confess that in a sense, the end of the poem was indeed, meant to be a cheerful surprise to the reader.

As for the poem tittering on being erotic, well... I never thought of it in this way... but it sounds good to me now that you mention it MyZenTrail, and I am thrilled that you enjoyed it.

However, I'm sorry you didn't feel much excitement in the poem Koba... and that you (MyZenTrail) felt it needed work. So I will do my utmost to rectify these things in the future.

Sincerely,

jes_da_man

MyZenTrailMyZenTrailabout 13 years ago
BabyRuth

I get it... (-.-) this tettered on erotic

and could have been taken to the other side (grin)

nice read, needs work, I enjoyed it!

KobaKobaabout 13 years ago

I'm not quite sure what is happening here. Is this a poem written for a candy bar? If so, how does a candy bar have a heart? Perhaps BabyRuth is a term of endearment for a lover? Could be, but still it seems like the ending was designed to surprise the reader. I just don't feel much excitement in the poem.