- Non-Erotic Poetry
- I commited Suicide
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Click hereMy love,
I sent from a distance
to far for you to know.
My days were always sad,
and my highs were always low.
The tears I can't shed for you,
are all that I have left.
On my heart i'll no longer let you,
play your game of theft.
So, if youre reading this,
then I guess that I am dead.
Don't feel bad, im only dead because of
what you hadn't said.
I will admit I cried, almost everyday,
I hate you, for making me feel this way.
I cried because you lied,...thats why I died.
Your the reason, I commited suicide.
- COMMENTS
Amyfriendabout 17 years agoyou won't be able to read my comments.. It was a very moving poem and I urge anyone with those kind of thoughts to seek medical help. You are never alone in this world.
LeBrozabout 17 years agoHmm, a bit of a downer; suicide seems to go that way. Watch word usage carefully: to/too and your/you're. The last line should start you're.
