- Non-Erotic Poetry
- I Contain Multitudes
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Click hereyou think I am a diamond
but I am elephantine
five metres by five
a
serpentine
boulder
- COMMENTS
twelveooneabout 13 years agosee, I would have screwed it up, gave it a point
serpentine
boulders
ay?
100, because Emp loved it andf didn't bother to vote.
Esperanza_Hidalgoabout 13 years agothe sounds this poem makes--and the colors I see when reading it. It works. I get it.
bogusagainabout 13 years agoI'm assuming with the format this is meant to be a concrete poem, in that context it works well, as a purely literary poem, not so well.
It is pointless making suggestions because any words of a different length than the ones they replace, would upset the visuals.
