tagNon-Erotic PoetryI Felt Almost Right

I Felt Almost Right

byKikahCornelius©

Each day is surreal. The soldier on the wall, swordfights, and getting toned out. There are differences. We sleep head to head on different beds. I told stories that made me laugh until I felt almost right. Either my myths need updating or the world has a vendetta. Maybe I am not supposed to forget. I got so used to torture. The lows match the highs. I miss you.

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by KikahCornelius09/18/16

Thanks

for your feedback. I like those thoughts.

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by greenmountaineer09/14/16

My imagination can connect the dots, real or not, among the sentences in this work, KC, maybe because of the first sentence; alot of nuance and contrast.

"We sleep head to head on different beds" andmore...

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