I Felt Almost Right

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Each day is surreal. The soldier on the wall, swordfights, and getting toned out. There are differences. We sleep head to head on different beds. I told stories that made me laugh until I felt almost right. Either my myths need updating or the world has a vendetta. Maybe I am not supposed to forget. I got so used to torture. The lows match the highs. I miss you.

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KikahCorneliusKikahCorneliusover 7 years agoAuthor
Thanks

for your feedback. I like those thoughts.

greenmountaineergreenmountaineerover 7 years ago

My imagination can connect the dots, real or not, among the sentences in this work, KC, maybe because of the first sentence; alot of nuance and contrast.

"We sleep head to head on different beds" and "I miss you" made me think of twin beds in the same room where once there may have been a queen.

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