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I Hate Waiting

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I hate waiting
for the next time when
my mind
will know nothing
but you

my eyes
will be filled
by your beauty

my nose
holds the scent
of your hair

my tongue
dips the sweetness
from your well

my hands
hold the promise
of our passion

my body
melts
into you

I hate waiting
but not as much
as I love you
coming

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sandspikesandspikeabout 19 years ago
Clever

I loved it. 5 1/2. Not a thing wrong with it.

flyguy69flyguy69about 19 years ago
Ha!

I laughed. I loved it. Fun poem, tung!

Du LacDu Lacabout 19 years ago
Simplicity..

I liked the simplicity of the stanzas and rhetoric in this poem... the simple complexity of love and hate.. desire and need.. good work

du lac

WickedEveWickedEveabout 19 years ago
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Another poem inspired by the hate thread? I like your approach. :)

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
A Pearl of a Poem~

wow I loved this one, superb poetry,

and the ending was awesome ...

'not as much I love you coming'

this was a great poem tung~

an excellent write

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