- Erotic Poetry
- I kiss petal
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Click hereI look into her eyes so bright
As I kiss her mound of gold
The flavor of the richness’ now
Just flowed into my mouth
I never know such grace and pleasure
As I give to her my tongue
For her moans and pull
Upon my hair made me just want To give her more.
I kiss her breast of softness delight
And hardened up the beads
As every newborn brings in life
She gave me mine tonight
I entered her with grace delight
And gave her more of me
My seed within just to be one
As I kiss her wonders lips
Tonight we made the final call
As one we just became.
To me start over for I need more
As my lips kiss her mound again.
- COMMENTS
YDDalmost 20 years agoYou have improved since your first submission.
This poem is much easier to read and enjoy.
You do have a verb tense slip ("kiss" and "hardened").
Does "richness? " require the apostrophe?
"wonders" - do you mean "wonderous"?
Keep writing
