I kissed the winter from her lips

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I kissed the winter from her lips
and licked the frost away
Nibbled her tingling fingertips
like nuns kneeling to pray
Then when the light behind her eyes
eclipsed to my dismay
I kissed the winter from her lips
and licked the frost away

I kissed the winter from her lips
and licked the frost away
Summoned the muse between her hips
where words bow to ballet
Then when our souls began to rise
and rode upon our sleigh
She kissed the winter from my lips
and licked the frost away

- LesbianMuses

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LesbianMusesLesbianMusesover 10 years agoAuthor
Grateful

Thank you! I am amazed and humbled for these beautiful replies. Perfect Thanksgiving gift a poet can receive. To answer your questions, I am very lesbian ^^" My favorite poems are Emily Dickinson "Heart We Will Forget Him," Thomas Hardy "Ah, are you digging on my grave?" and Edgar Allen Poe "The Raven." Favorite novel, Oscar Wilde "The Picture of Dorian Gray." I took an interest in syllabic poetry at 4 - Maurice Sendak's Poems of the Month "I will ride a crocodile down the chicken soupy Nile." Songwriting BA. Absolutely adore The Dubliners "7 Drunken Nights." :) Thank you.

twelveoonetwelveooneover 10 years ago
Er Ash

I comment on the poems

not pick up chicks

and since I've been called a ball breaker, i.e. if I see improvement, I suggest

and since I can't here that makes me very happy, to write further would leave a comment bigger than the poem.

Happy to see the comments. Be interested as to who you read.

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
Summoned the muse between her hips ....!!

Er --1201 , it's doubtful if Ms. Lesbian Muse would be interested in Hetrosexual male "balls" !?!

Oldbear63Oldbear63over 10 years ago
Beautiful

Really beautiful.

LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years ago
lovely

Nice rhymes, good flow, plenty of imagery.

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