- Non-Erotic Poetry
- I Know, I Know
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Whisper where you’ve run from
and I’ll tell you I’ve been there
with warm hand to chest
where the racing heart pounds
that could have been my own
some years ago
I ran in your shoes
and found them too big
I think you did too
but here we are standing
together in this
something we’ll never talk about
my hand on your chest
- COMMENTS
LeBrozabout 17 years agoI enjoy the powerful emotional undercurrent present in this piece; so subtly written of yet with such a strong presence.
KOLKOREabout 17 years agoI liked the poem for the restrained quality of its statements and for the rhythm which made me feel that it could have been used as great lyrics for a heart wrenching folk song, telling of the pains and understanding (of sorts) learned in some relations.
bluerainsabout 17 years agoin spinning clever lines ...I enjoyed the feeling it leaves behind...blue
