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Click hereI like big dicks and I cannot lie
I want big tits, I can't deny
When I see your dick I get so hot
I think about it quite a lot
So let's get down and dirty
Come on, don't make me wait til' thirty
Spank my ass and let's get busy
Fuck me til I'm downright dizzy
You like tight pussies and cannot lie
You want my pussy, you can't deny
The way I moan your name in bed
Just won't ever leave your head
You know you want me in your arms
So come and take me with your charms
Oh baby please don't try to fight
It's meant to be, it feels so right
So finally you see no need
To fight the love and ripening seed
Just let it out so deep inside me
We are young and foolish and free
Let's get drunk in a parking lot
That's your chance to take your shot
I want you, I need you, I have you
Let's waste no time, lets go and screw
I like eat pussy and ass and I like lick pussy and ass +919610113359
Isn't that what Literotica stands for ? Well I'm ignoring the Literary aspect and giving this poem a 5 for Eroticism.
I think its idea is good and the rhymes are ok. It has very off timing which makes it disjointed to read, I think if you took more time with it and really tried to get it right, it could have been a lot better, I encourage you to continue writing in the future and improve your technique. Despite the lack of technique however, I did find it amusing and fun to read.