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Click hereThis is my umpteenth attempt at a Villanelle; but only the second one I have posted.
If you don't understand what a Villanelle is, please read Wikipedia before you critique the poem.
I love to sit; I love to write
My stories as I stare and think;
I work on it with all my might.
Sometimes I dream a beuateous sight,
A lovely shade of female pink;
I love to sit; I love to write.
And sometimes when I'm up all night,
I see the story! Then I blink:
I work on it with all my might.
I craft my words 'til they're just right,
Not "hairy pussy", but as "mink" --
I love to sit, I love to write.
I always try to be polite
When writing with my pixel-ink:
I work on it with all my might.
I post them to a certain site
Which grants to me my proper link.
I love to sit; I love to write.
I work on it with all my might.
I think you need to stop taking your writing and yourself so seriously. What Harry asked was why, there was no hate, malice or vitriol, what he said wasn't even derogatory, think you need to finger the sand out of your vagina and lighten up. It's not a freaking Pulitzer Prize nomination, it's a poetry submission on a FREE to post porn site!
HAHAHAHHA!!!!
You write shit like that and question MY desire to write a villanelle?
I write
poe
try
TO make HarryHil
l
Understand
how to punctuate and maybe
make a rime
'cause you can't spell RHYME
You are so FUCKING pretentious, I can't believe you're published.
But then
Maybe your
poetry
with all that weird fucking punctuation is
Worth a g _ oddamned
Just
my
opin
i
on.
Pretentious asswipe.
bucket list: write a villanelle. (check)
you write damn well : loooved your story " Rape " !!!!