I Miss You

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~I Miss You~

We spend our days together
Share our hopes and dreams
I tell you my every wish
My longing for days better

You show me how it feels
To be given pure love
Pure emotion and heart
Something so real

I tell you my every desire
I bare to you my soul
And always you try
To make my spirit soar higher

You teach me how to live
A life I never knew
Something I always wanted
But only you could give

Now you are gone
I don’t know where to turn
My love taken from me
You were my only one

All I have left here
To remind me of you
Are a handful of pictures
Memories and fear

Fear that now without
You by my side
I’ll become who I was
Full of self doubt

A lost little girl
Locked in her room
Too scared to go out
Afraid of the world

You lent me your courage
To have confidence in myself
To believe I can do anything
When others would discourage

So now I just hide
Away from them all
God how I wish
I could be by your side

Without you here
My life is a wreck
I miss you so much
My best friend
My sister
My lover
My Bec

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9 Comments
inlovewithyourghostinlovewithyourghostabout 18 years ago
thankyou

*finding words difficult, just wipes a tear and smiles*

SubbevilSubbevilover 18 years ago
wow

I'm not a poet, but I spend a lot of time around very successful ones. That was as good as it gets.

musicman77musicman77over 18 years ago
straight from the heart

Dear Princess, you actually had me shedding a tear reading this poem. Becky meant a lot to a lot of people and your expressions were an excellent tribut to her. Please write more. Your feelings come through in your poems very well. Once again great job

turtledoveturtledoveover 18 years ago
Great Testement of a Bestfriend's love

Your poem shows your loss and the love you both had for each other. I know Becky would feel honored at such a wonderful testement of your heartfelt feelings. I join you in the heartache-I miss her as well--please continue expressing your feelings- your poems are truely heartfelt. TD

sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 18 years ago
SOMETIMES...

it is the memory that keeps

someone close, it is a big

world out there, but we all

fall like stars, under the

same sky...

very heartfelt,

keep that chin up..and know

YOU CAN !

-sGp-

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