I See Me

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I See Me
When I look into these eyes
I find things no one else ever catches a glimpse at

I see this fear of judgment
that makes her cower at confrontation

I see this hopelessness for the future
that make her choices her burden alone

I see this desperate need for companionship to make her strong
in the savage world of humans

I see this courage
caged in her thoughts of inferiority

I see these thoughts of abandonment
that make her cling to anything

I see this devotion to her beliefs
that makes her fear death

And I hate that the person I always see is me.

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AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Strong admissions.....

of loneliness and needing friendly companionship

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Strong admissions.....

of loneliness and needing friendly companionship

TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
Strong work

and painfully honest.

Perhaps now you will also see someone who writes poetry.

Not a bad thing to be.

: )

Thank you for sharing

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