i see the susan's

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i see the susan's
blackened eyes bobbing,
their rythmic dance
blowing beneath the sun.

its coming on,
the weight of bowed heads
shut eyes tight wrapped
for the memory of
polyester leisure days,
of grass stained toenails
and withered, sappy pines.
fatherless days of unforgiving
and secrets snuggled
close to mother's breast.
all the time spent wasted,
staring at my own reflection
in the swirl of a skirt.


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lobomaolobomaoalmost 18 years ago
•) Delicous!!!

Breeze blown tigh wraped flap

Of hemming hemline fracture

Dancing a dance of a passing past

Cutting across your memory so clear

So so now even we can see

As we wonder at your words

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