- Erotic Poetry
- I Thought of You
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Click hereI Thought of You
I thought of you this evening
As I was lost in dreamy sleep
I imagined you beside me
And my heart began to weep
You put your arms around me
And held me ever so tight
Entangled in a loving embrace
The moment felt so right
You whispered in my ear
Sweet nothings that made me blush
The heat spread through my body
And created an erotic rush
I felt the warmth from your lips
As they caressed the flesh of my back
My body started to shake
As my defenses began to crack
You put your hand between my thighs
And gave my lips a gentle touch
I shivered and writhed in pleasure
Wanting you oh so much
Just as I felt your lips touch mine
I heard the alarm clocks' tone
I thought of you this morning
When I woke up cold and alone
- COMMENTS
deathlynxover 16 years agoWe dream of what we want most and you have clearly described it to put the reader there...wonderful!
MrsDeathlynxover 16 years agoI am a firm believer that poetry is about the emotion it conveys, whatever comes from the heart that is not in story form is poetry in its own way. You captured emotion very well, nicely done Kiten.
CeriseNoireover 16 years agoFrom a technical point of view, there are a few things here and there that could be smoother. As far as capturing the emotion and getting it across though, this is right on target.
Anonymousover 16 years agoWonderful sentiments. I can visualize you tucked in, thinking of the special guy.
