I Walk On

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MINKX
MINKX
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I'm a child of the moment.
I'm a memory in the night.
Always trying, always doing.
But I never get it right.

I walk on, I get on but the
results are still the same.
I'm a fool, I'm a child.
Just a dead end I remain.

I'm a dreamer not a doer who's
Always been this way too long.
Just a hoping, maybe praying
still I always end up wrong.

Silly fool with a broken hard
that I behind the pretty smile.
I laugh and I smartly joke
but I'm hurting all the while.

Can you see the truth of me?
Where I fool others with my lies?
Will you hear me late at night
and love me when I cry?


MINKX
MINKX
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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Terrible

Terrible poetry no imagnination

lindianalindianaalmost 19 years ago
Fresh

Very fresh, witty, open...

Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
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your poem has been mentioned in today's reviews

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
Love it!

Your poetry is astounding me,

I am loving the emotions

you are using, your rhyming

is good and your use of

words is excellent.

~ J

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