I Want to Let Go

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I want to let go, lose control
I want you to control me, make me want you, then make me want you more, and more
I want it to take longer than I thought time could exist, and then a minute more
I want you to tell me how and when to think of you, when I can think of you and touch myself
I want you to make me obey your words, your thoughts, and wishes.
I want you to make it difficult and painful, cathartic and joyful
I want you to resist me when I promise you everything and more
I want you to push me away, let me wallow in my lust, make me cry for it
I want you to show me you are boss, with firm hands and strong words
I want control, not abuse or degradation but tough love
I want to wonder if you will ever relieve me, melt under your touch when you finally release me
I want you to relish the control, grow in your strength, and find pleasure in my distress
I want you to take me like no other ever has, body AND mind

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SimoneRouXSimoneRouXabout 12 years agoAuthor
RE: A Mantra for Wanna-Be Sub

Yes, and hopefully the beginning of a good series of stories.

ThanX for reading and leaving a comment. OxO

À votre bon cœur! -RouX

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
A MANTRA FOR A WANNA-BE SUB

to become. TK U MLJ LV NV