- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Iambic Please
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Click hereIf it but please you Sir, I will reckon
with the dawn, bid it spread its curling wings
and carry morning here. I will beckon
Sun to settle thus all days if it brings
vision to your eyes, annointing you light
for I am in the manner of your smile;
an Eos come for you at death of night,
darkness my enemy. I will beguile
you with laughter for Sir it pleases me
to hear the rumbling tumble of your joy
lilting as water sparkled on the sea,
lifting us in pleasure. I am not coy
in love or friendship Sir, my senses shine
within the glow of pleasing what is mine.
- COMMENTS
flyguy69almost 20 years agoThe goddess of dawn has a deft touch! Wonderful, Angeline!
Anonymousalmost 20 years ago....form poetry seem simple - but it's far from easy to do well. To get the meter plus have it flow smoothly AND create such imagery is truly an art that Ange has mastered.
lipsticksunset1984almost 20 years ago....is beautiful poetry whose quality is totally untouched by small breaks of classical meter. -- modern verse has long ago freed itself from the strict sonnetric rules of Shakespeare, and freedoms of all kinds have total license.
Mia Moorealmost 20 years agoI also am not good at recognizing form, but this one just felt like form, felt good, all the way through :)
