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- COMMENTS
duddle146over 17 years agoBitchy ~ in a nice way. The way the poem reads the word Bitch is said almost in a complimentary manner. The shoes - well they were wild ~ maybe just like the triple X-rated looking bitch. Well Crafted.
Man Rayover 17 years agoAuthorone read works and a single opinion counts, thank you. Like other poets before you in recent postings, flattered by your visit and to see your Username and candid comments; no apology for having to rate it in the ambivalent zone necessary! I think ‘bitch’ is uttered in the odd bedroom or two :)
Man Rayover 17 years agoAuthorfor seeing/hearing the rhythm/click movement throughout. I researched women and their ‘feel good’ shoes thus the image/words conveying a deliberate sense of power, fashion and attitude...written for VERY nice girls who collect saucy shoes :)
Anonymousover 17 years ago...but effective. The rhythm echoes the click of heels on marble floor. The image is inescapable but she's probably a very nice girl really.
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