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EllenMore
EllenMore
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First, we praise the dead,
and then our chords
must sing the living.
For we preach of life,

its complications,
sanguinary.

That I love you
is rock. One firm seam that will not be
dislodged, even

when I pull your root
up to my opened lips.

When the pastor says, "All rise,"
is it wrong
I am reminded of you?

EllenMore
EllenMore
13 Followers
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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Glad to see these "Letters"

Ellen More,

I do adore

your mystery phrases

that shine in the light.

A simple phrase

a subtle turn

your vexng message:

Next; I yearn

PiscatorPiscatorover 8 years ago

Clever yet not without depth. May make a churchgoer of me yet.

legerdemerlegerdemerover 8 years ago
Oh so good!

I might have missed this for too long - so glad Todski pointed us to it in PF&D.

I have little to say other than I loved it, loved the way you started in such a serious vein and ended up hitting my laugh button. And I couldn't agree More with Ashesh about the last stanza - it's a hoot!

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 8 years ago
Ellen you naughty

Girl : the last stanza was too much !!!5- ed !

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