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In an ideal world,
I'd never hide a thing,
and we'd be as open
as newborn stars,
letting everything shine
in awkward brilliance.

And I would never fear
what it is
you and I have secreted away,
these pocketed insecurities,
or what truths may be
misconstrued.

Because I want to be faithful
as the oldest stars,
those that guide you
on the dark sea,
and the truth
our Rosetta
that opens understanding.

And when your fingers
brush away the dust,
tracing the fine lines
of this soul as you decipher
the rhymes and reasons,
I only want
that brilliance returned,
that we may live
without fear.

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Unbridled_PassionUnbridled_Passionabout 17 years ago
that we may

live without fear-this line just grasped me-loved your work

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
truth

Truth crushed to earth shall rise again ~ may the eternal years be hers.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 17 years ago
mention

this poem mentioned on the thread New Poem Reviews

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Truth...

however painful - will overcome.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Well constructed and descriptive piece of the ideal world we all wish could be real; unlike the real world, where secrets are held and only some half-truths revealed.

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